Audience feedback for digipak and magazine adverts

This is my audience feedback for my digipak and magazine adverts. The draft that they were looking at are of the pictures in the post below this video. Overall, the comments I found were that they thought I could use a better font for the advert and digipak. They recommended something more striking yet still simple such as times new roman. So I will go back to my draft and edit this to see if this looks better. I will also do this with some of my images to see if I can improve them. Due to time constraints, I think it will be unlikely that I will be able to do another photo-shoot to get the images recommended. However I do like my chosen images and do not wish to really alter them too much as I think they suit the theme of the video and are very appealing. I hope that making a few smaller adjustments that were advised to me will make a positive difference to the visual appearance of my digipak and magazine ads.

Audience Feedback from first draft

Audience feedback about video idea

I decided to get some audience feedback about my music video idea before I decided to film so that I would be able to alter any scenes or ideas that my audience may not like. This has helped me re think about a few ideas for my music video, as my audience said, they think that even though a split screen is a good idea, they think it could be over complicated and may make the narratives hard to understand. I think I have a variety of ideas for my video, I have just decided to film everything I can and experiement with what storylines and narratives work well and how they can be represented on screen. Now that I have some audience feedback, I am going to continue planning and finalizing my planning so that I can begin to film.  Overall, I have considered what my audience has said, and I have taken into consideration the advice they gave me and I am relatively happy that the like my song choice and basic idea.