Audience feedback for digipak and magazine adverts

This is my audience feedback for my digipak and magazine adverts. The draft that they were looking at are of the pictures in the post below this video. Overall, the comments I found were that they thought I could use a better font for the advert and digipak. They recommended something more striking yet still simple such as times new roman. So I will go back to my draft and edit this to see if this looks better. I will also do this with some of my images to see if I can improve them. Due to time constraints, I think it will be unlikely that I will be able to do another photo-shoot to get the images recommended. However I do like my chosen images and do not wish to really alter them too much as I think they suit the theme of the video and are very appealing. I hope that making a few smaller adjustments that were advised to me will make a positive difference to the visual appearance of my digipak and magazine ads.